Electric Blue.

I like the whole dark atmosphere of this piece. :) One thing I kind of don't get, and it's probably because I've been brain dead the whole day, is... "Why ...

I like it, overall. :) I'm curious to read what happens next. I think I found a grammatical error though... Across the street, both trash cans had been throw into ...

That was tragic. I really like the story. I especially love the ending. It's hard-hitting. But there's something about the note that bothers me. It doesn't sound too sincere or ...

That was really good. :) You captured the emotions you wanted to capture perfectly. There wasn't anything that ruined the flow of the story. I think you typed "could" instead ...